When i read the beginning the second time i really thought that i connected with it more, the second time , for some reason, I just feel like i understood it exponentially better. It just clicked. The first time i didnt even get that he was being imprisoned. the only thing that i got was that he was immune to the flare and they just went out and said it.
Cole, you did something that good readers do - realize when they are confused and go back to make sense of it. Sometimes reading a section again can make much more sense. Please remember to include your reading times.
ReplyDeleteAlso, work on consistent capitalization. The blogs are relatively informal, but they should show the 6 traits of good writing, including conventions.
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