It was Christmas time whenever i had come home for school from my dads house and it was the first time i was at my moms since Christmas morning and whenever i walked in i turned to the left and to my surprise Mr.David, my step-dad, was trying to catch this little Grey bundle of energy and whenever i realized t i was wonder-struck, never would i have thought that my parents would actually give me another animal. I felt amazing.
Sunday, January 29, 2012
My pets
I love my dog. He turned 2 in November and i really am thankful for him. about 3 years ago whenever I first entered 6th grade, my first year at my new school, and i had really wanted a dog. we had 2 cats at the time and we had always needed to go to pets mart for either dog food or cat food and one day i remember that they had these dogs for adoption and i thought that a puppy was the cutest think in the world. I remember asking my mom for one of them so many times. My mom said the time wasn't right yet and i knew what that meant.
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Good story, Cole. I like the details. Be careful on the difference between "when" and "whenever." "Whenever" is only for future ("whenever I finish this book, I want to read the sequel") or habitual--stuff that happens all the time ("whenever it rains, I try to remember to bring an umbrella" or "Whenever I feel like I have too much homework, I take a few deep breaths and make a plan"). If you are talking about something that happened once in the past, like a memorable day of getting a new puppy, you want "when."
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